Notes On Narrativity (for Gail Scott)

Steve McCaffery

 

Footsteps in an orderly sequence and therefore predictable. Enclose it in a sentient pronoun and this monologue lives. An activity of mind carried a little further and thereby: judgement. Now the moors seem imponderable. Now the spark plugs show damp. Now the sentence repeats that the pumpernickel’s stale. A strategy then of windows. Colourless, almost opaque. Just enough to see you with. Articulate, the floor, the door crack, the switch, the light. This room is not a room. This wall is in thinking. January 5. “Thomas left us.” Precision. Not of cogs but machination still described as important to a story. How narrative begins in a one that is all of them. Suddenly, a theme.


They brought him home drunk and incapable at nine

thirty i knew

because i checked my watch which was eight minutes

fast nine thirty

six then actually then nine thirty one when they

brought him back.

“Thomas” (that is). Across the moors in a second

reference to moors (inexcusable as simile like a

dream of the factual).


The bad story begins. We had seen it earlier, a grown-up among utensils I won’t bother to name. And so it appears to anyone who wonders why the moors also were dispensable. Inscrutable, curvilinear, designed of brass filligree with lions, gryphons, even a seme. The cost was a life. The body deposited behind the public urinals on any street the narrator doesn’t bother to name. The fiction thus evolves through social Darwinism to the center of this crowd. A “public” weal of “democratic” pronouns . . . . . .

Let’s begin again. Once upon a time at the Festival Descartes an orderly sequence of expenditures took place beyond the moors. Departure at effect seven: “the essence of Nature is freshly conceived.” Now the coal seems deep and rich but overlooked. This is what a narrative shift means.

Then it re-forms. The it re-affirms. It represents it as itself. This story it appears as.
“This is a story that these words begin.” Finally to disappear. You disappears. Your fiction reappears.
This is when this / then


is a plot.



All of the above or else


I was going to meet a woman who had left

a hat on my car.


Possession completes this. Not narrative.




1985-2002 Toronto-Berkeley-Toronto



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